Original corporate memo:
Thank you for completing the April Engagement Survey—64% of you responded, a level near the top quartile compared to other firms in the survey database.
You gave us insight into what you value and how we’re doing as a leadership team. We did well in client focus, safety, and knowledge sharing, but we can’t be complacent. We need better cross-business cooperation, talent retention, and organizational communication.
Expect debrief sessions on specific survey results, which vary by operation and will need action plans tailored for each.
Again, thanks for your feedback.92 words vs. 238 in the original—a 61% reduction.